Comment: After seeing my rating I realized that I erred in not editing the press release. I sincerely apologize for the oversight, however, I mistakenly thought the press release you included was for informational background for writing the home page text. I can see now that you wanted that re-edited as well. Although I think the press release is concise and informative as it is, if you would like me to edit it, please let me know what your concerns are about it and I will be happy to do a rewrite. Thanks!