In general, I like where you are going with this... a few thoughts:
1. A colon ( : ) should appear after "Please Choose a CampusPoint office:" The word office at the end should be changed to "location:"
2. I liked the old fashioned pen better than the current silver one.
3. The stamps need color. Consider placing them above and to the right of the postcards, instead of on top of the right side postcards. I think the pen is positioned well.
4. Consider introducing some color into the "FIND LOCAL JOBS..." but just a bit of color... we want this text to stick out but just a bit more than it already does...
5. The postcards underneath our featured postcards appear blank... we should at least have the illusion that the postcards underneath have something on them.
Disclosure: I created all the stuff in my entry all by myself. (?)
Hi,
on first look you might not see the difference between version5 and this version - version6. But if you open them both in tabs and change tabs you'll see that version6 looks a lot more live and realistic. That's because we've added paper textures to the postcards and drawn some much more realistic shadows for all elements. That gave more contrast and, compared to version5, the scene seems to come to life.
We'd like to work more on the layout to create exactly what suits your needs so please provide some feedback or guidance - what you like; what you don't like; Is there something you think we should add, remove or change?!
Just want to be sure we're heading into right direction.
You can preview our work in browser here:
Comments
1. A colon ( : ) should appear after "Please Choose a CampusPoint office:" The word office at the end should be changed to "location:"
2. I liked the old fashioned pen better than the current silver one.
3. The stamps need color. Consider placing them above and to the right of the postcards, instead of on top of the right side postcards. I think the pen is positioned well.
4. Consider introducing some color into the "FIND LOCAL JOBS..." but just a bit of color... we want this text to stick out but just a bit more than it already does...
5. The postcards underneath our featured postcards appear blank... we should at least have the illusion that the postcards underneath have something on them.
Thanks for your continued efforts.
20-Jul-08, 10:19pm GMT
Disclosure: I created all the stuff in my entry all by myself. (?)
Hi,on first look you might not see the difference between version5 and this version - version6. But if you open them both in tabs and change tabs you'll see that version6 looks a lot more live and realistic. That's because we've added paper textures to the postcards and drawn some much more realistic shadows for all elements. That gave more contrast and, compared to version5, the scene seems to come to life.
We'd like to work more on the layout to create exactly what suits your needs so please provide some feedback or guidance - what you like; what you don't like; Is there something you think we should add, remove or change?!
Just want to be sure we're heading into right direction.
You can preview our work in browser here:
http://www.kreativa-studio.hr/contest/campuspoint_v6.html
Best regards,
Kreativa Studio
20-Jul-08, 1:17am GMT