The Compliance Radar

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danielle creative
Entry 14-Sep-08, 6:12pm GMT

Here's the contributors page. Open for feedback
danielle creative
Entry 14-Sep-08, 2:36pm GMT

Hi Gordon.

Greetings!

Thanks for the positive feedback.

Here's the modification. If I'm on the right track I'm willing to do the other 2 design task.

Cheers.
Danielle
danielle creative
Entry 14-Sep-08, 2:19pm GMT

Hi Gordon.

Greetings.

Thanks for the positive feedback.

Here's the modification. If I am on the right track I'm willing to do the 2 other design task.

Cheers.
Danielle
GordonTees buyer
Entry Score 14-Sep-08, 11:08am GMT

Hi Jim,

It's looking really good (very high 4 score).

Thanks for making the adjustments, here's my feedback on them:

- Like the position of the 'Contrib Expert', 'Ind' and 'Reg Area' blocks. Can you make them the same height?
- Would it work if the background on the 'Ind' and 'Reg Area' ...(more)
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GordonTees buyer
Entry Comment 14-Sep-08, 10:55am GMT

Ah! I'm not totally crazy - there is another block missing. It's the 'upcoming events' block. Please can you add. Thx, G.
GordonTees buyer
Entry Score 14-Sep-08, 10:53am GMT

Nice idea but I far prefer your other two entries. This looks too 'washed out' even with the color of your icons down the bottom. I'm not sure about having 'Polls' and 'Resource' next to each other either. It could get too cramped with content in the real ...(more)
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GordonTees buyer
Entry Score 14-Sep-08, 10:50am GMT

Teresa,

Thanks for another excellent update. In short, I like this one a lot too!

[As I said before, this entry means you seem to have two distinct entries at the moment: this one and the one with the 'Inds', 'Reg Areas', 'Experts' and 'Resources' in the right column.]

Only a ...(more)
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GordonTees buyer
Entry Comment 14-Sep-08, 10:44am GMT

Ignore my comment about the 'most emailed / most read' block being missing. I must have gone temporarily blind! Apologies.
GordonTees buyer
Entry Score 14-Sep-08, 10:42am GMT

Teresa - I'm treating this entry as an early version of the improved entry (ie: with the 'resource centre' added) which you submitted soon after. All my comments are attached to that one. Thanks, G.
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GordonTees buyer
Entry Score 14-Sep-08, 10:40am GMT

Teresa,

Thanks for an excellent update. In short, I like it a lot. You've kept all the good stuff from your first post and made some great progress too.

I'm particularly interested in your choice to put the 'Inds', 'Reg Areas', 'Experts' and 'Resources' into the right column. Nice! ...(more)
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jimthecamel creative
Entry 14-Sep-08, 10:26am GMT

Thanks for your constructive feedback.

Here is a modified design.
GordonTees buyer
Entry Score 14-Sep-08, 10:14am GMT

Amazing first submission. Thank you.

First impressions are excellent. It has a very business-like, professional feel but it isn't too dry and boring. I love the fact you've incorporated a menu into the header. This opens up some interesting options for me.

Also font choice is good, colors are ...(more)
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virtuosoonline creative
Entry Comment 14-Sep-08, 4:40am GMT

Oh, I am sorry, I will be come up with variations ASAP.
teresa creative
Entry 14-Sep-08, 3:17am GMT

Here is another color variation. Please let me know if you have any feedback.

Thanks!
Teresa
GordonTees buyer
Entry Score 13-Sep-08, 11:07pm GMT

Overall this is a very nice looking submission with very little missing. Thank you!

Here are my specific thoughts:

- the first two columns work well but I think the blocks in the third (right) column run together too much. They seem bunched up which makes them look unappealing and difficult ...(more)
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teresa creative
Entry 13-Sep-08, 10:37pm GMT

I added the resource center
GordonTees buyer
Entry Score 13-Sep-08, 10:19pm GMT

(I've made my comments about this post on the white background version of this page.)
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GordonTees buyer
Entry Score 13-Sep-08, 10:18pm GMT


Many thanks for your two good entries. I much prefer this white background version so I'm only commenting on this one (although all the comments except the final one would also apply to your other version).

- I like the font of the site title but is the font going to ...(more)
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teresa creative
Entry 13-Sep-08, 10:18pm GMT

I rearranged the content.

Thanks!
Teresa
danielle creative
Entry 13-Sep-08, 10:07pm GMT

Hello.

Here's my entry. Open for feedback.

Thanks
GordonTees buyer
Entry Score 13-Sep-08, 9:52pm GMT

Hi Jim,

Awesome entry. I completely understand what you've tried to achieve with your minimal pictures/graphics. On the whole it's worked incredibly well. I particularly love the font & colors of the site title and the radar icon for the logo. Also previously I haven't liked any of ...(more)
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GordonTees buyer
Entry Score 13-Sep-08, 9:35pm GMT

Hi again BlueOwl,

Thanks for your revised post. It's looking better and all the good stuff is still there (the positioning of the 'resource centre' block and the design of its icons are my personal favourites).

Here's the stuff I'm not so keen on:

- I feel there are still too many lines ...(more)
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GordonTees buyer
Entry Comment 13-Sep-08, 9:21pm GMT

Thanks for your questions.

Apologies for me being wrong about the text logo. But is it in a font that will be readily available to most browsers (eg: IE7 or FF) working on different operating systems (eg: Mac or PC). If it is then I'm very happy!

Please don't leave out ...(more)
teresa creative
Entry 13-Sep-08, 9:20pm GMT

I have created a more graphical head and finished adding the content. Please let me know if you have any additional feedback.

Thanks!
Teresa
GordonTees buyer
Entry Score 13-Sep-08, 9:16pm GMT

Speedy response! Many thanks.

On the whole I love it (for example: the dark buttons in 'Reg Area' & 'Industry' are a great touch and the text sizes are now perfect throughout the page).

But there are still a few little points...:

- the breadcrumb bar still isn't doing it for ...(more)
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