Thank you for throwing your hat into the ring. Though obviously time is short to give you feedback for improvements, I can say that, as is, this gets thrown into the mix. I appreciate your integration of automated movement, and that you've stayed true to our colors. Of your submissions, this is my favorite.
That said, I'm sure others in my group would appreciate greater richness of color in the bottom portion. Though our brief certainly noted "white space," we perhaps should have said "empty space." Is is possible to add more depth of color to the bottom section?
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Thank you for throwing your hat into the ring. Though obviously time is short to give you feedback for improvements, I can say that, as is, this gets thrown into the mix. I appreciate your integration of automated movement, and that you've stayed true to our colors. Of your submissions, this is my favorite.
That said, I'm sure others in my group would appreciate greater richness of color in the bottom portion. Though our brief certainly noted "white space," we perhaps should have said "empty space." Is is possible to add more depth of color to the bottom section?
Best,
Sean
4-Aug-09, 8:29pm GMT
Disclosure: This design includes photos, illustrations or fonts created by others but I have the right to both use and resell. (?)
Second proposal.4-Aug-09, 8:11pm GMT