This is not what I meant. The first proposal was good, but I had a few remarks on that home page. Now you created a productpage. My sugestion is that you work on the homepage first. When that is good, we can work on the other 6 pages.
Disclosure: This design includes photos, illustrations or fonts created by others but I have the right to both use and resell. (?)
Here are the changes I made:
- Added current website content
- Removed the bottom 3 column rectangle
- Made the footer shorter, added color variation
- Added a search box
- Added a Social Tools Button in footer
- Added slide show example
As for the 'personal' thing, that's all depending on the content you put in the site for the most part. There's isn't too much else for me to do to make it more personal I don't think.
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24-Jun-09, 3:39pm GMT
This is not what I meant. The first proposal was good, but I had a few remarks on that home page. Now you created a productpage. My sugestion is that you work on the homepage first. When that is good, we can work on the other 6 pages.
Is that okay?
Richard
24-Jun-09, 9:53am GMT
Disclosure: This design includes photos, illustrations or fonts created by others but I have the right to both use and resell. (?)
Here are the changes I made:- Added current website content
- Removed the bottom 3 column rectangle
- Made the footer shorter, added color variation
- Added a search box
- Added a Social Tools Button in footer
- Added slide show example
As for the 'personal' thing, that's all depending on the content you put in the site for the most part. There's isn't too much else for me to do to make it more personal I don't think.
Thanks for the feedback!
~ Ryan
24-Jun-09, 6:39am GMT