Thanks for the feedback. I am sorry that this veered from what you were asking for. After all this is something you have to live with. This might be much but would it be possible for you to post screen-shot pictures of the clif bars you actually like. They have quite a few patterns out there and I might be able to develop a better design if I have a better visual direction. I am going to spend a little more time coming up with directions so I am going to take a bit longer to turn something around.
Twisha,
I think I would like to see more companion illustration rather than leashed training imagery. Also rather than silhouettes I think the Clif Bar design is directly out there. But giving feedback not tying you down... :-)
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12-Jan-09, 3:54am GMT
Thanks for the feedback. I am sorry that this veered from what you were asking for. After all this is something you have to live with. This might be much but would it be possible for you to post screen-shot pictures of the clif bars you actually like. They have quite a few patterns out there and I might be able to develop a better design if I have a better visual direction. I am going to spend a little more time coming up with directions so I am going to take a bit longer to turn something around.
Cheers!
tsb
12-Jan-09, 3:53am GMT
I think I would like to see more companion illustration rather than leashed training imagery. Also rather than silhouettes I think the Clif Bar design is directly out there. But giving feedback not tying you down... :-)
Doug
11-Jan-09, 11:56pm GMT
Disclosure: This design includes photos, illustrations or fonts created by others but I have the right to both use and resell. (?)
Heya Doug,I took into account the notes you had written and created this package. A lot of the inspiration for the style comes from the CLIF packaging.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best,
tsb
11-Jan-09, 10:23pm GMT