Mobile Marketing Logo

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$250
Ended 31-Jul-08
This project is complete.

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Lowered score because the revision is better.

29-Jul-08, 8:32pm GMT

kimdushinski buyer
It is better. Would making the letters on the bottom a bit taller help at all? It is still just a bit too spread out for me. But I also trust that if you say this is the best it gets...

I like the filled in rectangles for the white background and the white/green ones for the reverse logo. If the bottom line was easier to read, I might like that reverse logo the best of all. It does pop a lot.

This is one of my favorites so far, I appreciate your continued work on it.

28-Jul-08, 11:25pm GMT

kimdushinski buyer

Disclosure: I created everything in my entry and I didn't copy anyone else's concept. (?)

I agree the bottom line Marketing Profits, was too spread out and was not easy enough to read, especially in the smaller versions. Adding the .com actually made it worse, I played with the kerning and just made the font larger - in the end - this actually made the logo stand out a little more.

This set - does not have the light green version. It has the black, white, drk green, and size variations.

28-Jul-08, 2:52pm GMT

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