Thanks for revising it. Here's a few more thoughts to move this forward. I appreciate that you want to keep working on it. I do like the way the text pops out.
I think the key word to emphasize is either Mobile or Marketing, but not Profits. The way the color scheme is it seems to focus on Profits.
I don't want a background color built into the logo, so let's don't use the green background.
The phone is now too straight up. Could it lean out slightly? The first version it was leaning in, this is straight up and I'd like to see it outward leaning if you don't mind.
Something is not quite right with the circles. They feel a little like bubbles.
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I think the key word to emphasize is either Mobile or Marketing, but not Profits. The way the color scheme is it seems to focus on Profits.
I don't want a background color built into the logo, so let's don't use the green background.
The phone is now too straight up. Could it lean out slightly? The first version it was leaning in, this is straight up and I'd like to see it outward leaning if you don't mind.
Something is not quite right with the circles. They feel a little like bubbles.
28-Jul-08, 11:05pm GMT
Disclosure: I created everything in my entry and I didn't copy anyone else's concept. (?)
thanks for the feedback. Lets keep revisioning til its a competitor..!Cibi
28-Jul-08, 10:54pm GMT