Mobile Marketing Logo
a logo project by kimdushinski

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kimdushinski buyer
Entry Score 29-Jul-08, 12:12pm GMT

Thanks for doing it with the capital letters. I do like it much better that way.

Of these, the one I like is the one with the slightly angled phone graphic and the words all spelled out.
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kimdushinski buyer
Entry Score 29-Jul-08, 12:03pm GMT

Thanks for submitting another choice.

I like this entry's typestyle better because it stands out more. I also like where you put the .com. It is unusual but looks really good.

The graphic element doesn't appeal to me though.

Thanks.

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kimdushinski buyer
Entry Score 29-Jul-08, 12:01pm GMT

Thanks for submitting a logo. I appreciate it.

I see what you mean by the directional buttons, but it doesn't grab me.

I do really like that you put marketing in bold. It really helps the words not run together.

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ninet6 creative
Entry 29-Jul-08, 11:04am GMT

Revision on the previous one, but incorporating a signal wave of the "o" ...
ninet6 creative
Entry 29-Jul-08, 11:02am GMT

Revised logo bringing in the phone icon ...
ninet6 creative
Entry 29-Jul-08, 11:00am GMT

Revisions based on your feedback :)
ninet6 creative
Entry Comment 29-Jul-08, 9:57am GMT

Thanks for all the great feedback ... I'll go play around with some new concepts for you, using this typeface and introducing the mobile ...
fredK creative
Entry 29-Jul-08, 8:12am GMT

Simplified the "button"-esque icon and changed to an alternate font. This font is free for all use.
fredK creative
Entry 29-Jul-08, 7:43am GMT

Logo based on the selection buttons on my mobile (answer /directional / select / hang up). It contains within that overall shape all the elements you would need -- focus, target, direction (moving forward while keeping track backwards) etc.

About the disclosure: if selected you will need your own license for the ...(more)
kimdushinski buyer
Project Update 29-Jul-08, 1:59am GMT

UPDATE:
Thank you so much for your submissions. As you can see I give feedback and buyer scores on EVERY design that is submitted. I appreciate your effort.
kimdushinski buyer
Entry Comment 29-Jul-08, 1:57am GMT

And, if you do submit a redesign on this, can you please make sure it fits inside the preview square? I am going to ask several people to vote in the crowd score and I'm afraid they won't know to click on it to see the whole thing.

Thanks.
kimdushinski buyer
Entry Score 29-Jul-08, 1:55am GMT

Revised score lower because I like the revised concept better.
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kimdushinski buyer
Entry Score 29-Jul-08, 1:54am GMT

Rated buyer score lower because I like the revised concept by this creative better.
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kimdushinski buyer
Entry Score 29-Jul-08, 1:34am GMT

OK, I really do like the second one with the phone and the circles behind it. Looks like mobile can hit the bullseye.

Could you try it with the bullseye being black and the phone green?

Could Mobile be done in the same typeface as MarketingProfits? I just don't like that rounded ...(more)
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kimdushinski buyer
Entry Score 29-Jul-08, 1:31am GMT

Thanks for submitting these ideas.

I really like the idea of embedding the graphic into the texts. Very unusual. Good use of space.

I like the second one with the phone in it and the third one with just the radial lines.

I love the typeface used for MarketingProfits, but not the one for ...(more)
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Kbaz22 creative
Entry 29-Jul-08, 1:15am GMT

Here are a couple of versions taking the "i" from Mobile and making it a phone icon. I know you mentioned having all the text on one line, but I tried a couple stacked.

Thanks for the opportunity!

PS - no clip art was used or harmed in the making ...(more)
Kbaz22 creative
Entry 29-Jul-08, 1:10am GMT

Some variations on a theme. I tried to add a little fun, so the logo wouldn't look too stiff but still look professional.
kimdushinski buyer
Entry Score 28-Jul-08, 11:25pm GMT

It is better. Would making the letters on the bottom a bit taller help at all? It is still just a bit too spread out for me. But I also trust that if you say this is the best it gets...

I like the filled in rectangles for the white background and ...(more)
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kimdushinski buyer
Entry Score 28-Jul-08, 11:05pm GMT

Thanks for revising it. Here's a few more thoughts to move this forward. I appreciate that you want to keep working on it. I do like the way the text pops out.

I think the key word to emphasize is either Mobile or Marketing, but not Profits. The way the color scheme ...(more)
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kimdushinski buyer
Entry Score 28-Jul-08, 10:57pm GMT

Thanks for this option as well. That scroll art is so totally fun. I love it. I'm not sure that I like it in a logo though - it seems like it doesn't fit somehow.

Of the four you submitted I like the first on the best - with the filled ...(more)
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monsterleo creative
Entry 28-Jul-08, 10:54pm GMT

thanks for the feedback. Lets keep revisioning til its a competitor..!

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kimdushinski buyer
Entry Score 28-Jul-08, 10:49pm GMT

Thanks for this option too. It is so nice to see so many choices because it makes me see how much I really like some and others not so much. This one is my least favorite of what you've submitted.
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kimdushinski buyer
Entry Score 28-Jul-08, 10:47pm GMT

Thanks for another option. I prefer your first one better although I like this phone graphic much better than the other one.

Again, I'm not liking the reverse.

Thanks so much for creating the phone graphics from scratch!
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kimdushinski buyer
Entry Score 28-Jul-08, 10:46pm GMT

Thanks for submitting this design.

What I love about it is the filled in O's - really fun and a good use of color. I also love the dot com spelled out like that. I also love the typestyle you chose.

The swirl is really fun and I like it, even though ...(more)
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kimdushinski buyer
Entry Score 28-Jul-08, 10:43pm GMT

Wow, you've really submitted a lot for me to consider. Thanks.

I really like the all caps. It looks really great and I love the choice of typeface.

The graphic just doesn't say "cell phone" to me at all. If this had something that conveyed that concept I would like this ...(more)
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