Mobile Marketing Logo
a logo project by kimdushinski

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$250
Ended 31-Jul-08
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richsilverberg creative
Entry 30-Jul-08, 3:44pm GMT

I look forward to your feedback.

Regards
—RIch
richsilverberg creative
Entry Comment 30-Jul-08, 3:43pm GMT

Withdrawn: revision
richsilverberg creative
Entry 30-Jul-08, 3:27pm GMT

My logo is attached. i look forward to your feedback.

regards
Rich
kimdushinski buyer
Entry Score 30-Jul-08, 12:10pm GMT

I really like the one with three lines of type. It looks really great and l like the use of color.

I'm not fond of all lower case, but I'm not sure this logo would work with caps for the MMP.

Like the symbol and where the .com is placed.

Thanks for submitting ...(more)
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kimdushinski buyer
Entry Score 30-Jul-08, 12:08pm GMT

Thanks for submitting this design. I like it a lot. It is different than what I've been seeing and the words look good stacked like that.

The one thing that concerns me is that the phone graphic could date this logo within just a few years.

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welikerock creative
Entry 30-Jul-08, 9:02am GMT

My proposal. Typographic logo with a 'signal' graphic replacing letter 'i' to highlight word mobile. Feedback appreciated. Thanks.
ALF creative
Entry 30-Jul-08, 4:40am GMT

Hope you like it.
monsterleo creative
Entry Comment 30-Jul-08, 4:17am GMT

Withdrawn: The buyer didn't really like this one.
monsterleo creative
Entry Comment 30-Jul-08, 4:17am GMT

Withdrawn: The buyer didn't really like this one.
monsterleo creative
Entry Comment 30-Jul-08, 4:17am GMT

Withdrawn: The buyer didn't really like this one.
kimdushinski buyer
Entry Score 30-Jul-08, 4:01am GMT

I can see it fine in the window, but one thing I really notice is the font is so thin that it doesn't pop off the page easily enough. When I see the thumbnails I can hardly see the text.

Also, I think what I really liked was the funky swirl.

For some ...(more)
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kimdushinski buyer
Entry Score 30-Jul-08, 3:58am GMT

Thanks for doing this revision. I don't like the logo as much without that funky swirl and the phone centered at the top of the text is not my favorite placement.
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kimdushinski buyer
Entry Score 30-Jul-08, 3:57am GMT

Again, I like your other design so much that this one doesn't rate.
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kimdushinski buyer
Entry Score 30-Jul-08, 3:56am GMT

I love your other design so much that this one just doesn't even compare. Also the radial lines when used multiple times look like flashlights scanning around to find their way.
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kimdushinski buyer
Entry Score 30-Jul-08, 3:54am GMT

Thanks for submitting this and I sincerely appreciate the effort. I don't care for the phone graphic as it seems way too odd. I know my book cover has a fish jumping out of a phone, but this seems a bit more severe somehow.

Thank you though for trying.
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kimdushinski buyer
Entry Score 30-Jul-08, 3:42am GMT

Thank you for submitting this. I appreciate you taking the time to do it.

I like the idea of the profits line going through the phone graphic, but I don't care for the graphic on top of the words. Also, I've come to realize through this process that I'm not a big ...(more)
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kimdushinski buyer
Entry Score 30-Jul-08, 3:39am GMT

Thanks for submitting this, but the graphic is not what I like - it looks like a phone pole, which is not mobile phones, but wired phones. You other submission is better.
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kimdushinski buyer
Entry Score 30-Jul-08, 3:38am GMT

While I like the typestyle, I don't like that the graphic actually represents landline phones. I like your last revision much better.
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kimdushinski buyer
Entry Score 30-Jul-08, 3:37am GMT

I like this one the best of your latest revisions. Thanks for working up the different concepts.
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kimdushinski buyer
Entry Score 30-Jul-08, 3:36am GMT

Oh yeah, I think you are onto something there. Much more symbolic without looking dated. I like this concept so much more than the multiple radial lines too.

Thanks for doing this to get it this far. I really like it a lot.
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monsterleo creative
Entry 30-Jul-08, 2:46am GMT

and my last revision....
monsterleo creative
Entry 30-Jul-08, 2:30am GMT

i brought the back graphic down in size for this composition
monsterleo creative
Entry Comment 30-Jul-08, 2:29am GMT

Withdrawn: Whoops, I uploaded the wrong file.
29design creative
Entry 30-Jul-08, 2:24am GMT

Ah ha! Have sorted how to use the phone in a way you won't be sick of it in 6 months!!!! What do you think?
monsterleo creative
Entry 30-Jul-08, 2:22am GMT

another composition