Logo for the girl in the cafe
a logo project by thegirlinthecafe

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Ended 27-Oct-08
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thegirlinthecafe buyer
Entry Score 26-Oct-08, 8:57am GMT

I think if the coffee cup consisted of just simple lines, no grading on the plate, just lines it would be better. The simpler and cleaner the better.

Still think the spoon kind of turns it into a soup or icecream bowl. Thanks.
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thegirlinthecafe buyer
Entry Score 26-Oct-08, 8:54am GMT

I would be hard to use this on a business card, it needs to be more compact. Also I would prefer a sans serif font, as stated in the brief. Thanks.
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thegirlinthecafe buyer
Entry Score 26-Oct-08, 8:53am GMT

I would really like a sans serif font. And also I fint this a bit messy, I would like a clean and crisp design, sorry. Thanks.
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thegirlinthecafe buyer
Entry Score 26-Oct-08, 8:51am GMT

As specified in the brief I would like a sans serif font and everything in lowercase please. Thanks.
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thegirlinthecafe buyer
Entry Score 26-Oct-08, 8:50am GMT

Nice font and colours but I don't really get the divider. Some other visual element might work better, just to make it a bit more special than just words.
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thegirlinthecafe buyer
Entry Comment 26-Oct-08, 8:49am GMT

Am not a fan of italics sorry. Thanks.
thegirlinthecafe buyer
Entry Score 26-Oct-08, 8:48am GMT

I quite like this, it's simple, nice colours and font.
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thegirlinthecafe buyer
Entry Score 26-Oct-08, 8:46am GMT

Sans serif is not a specific font but a certain type of font:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sans-serif

I don't quite understand the concept of this design, sorry. Thanks.
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phraephrae creative
Entry 26-Oct-08, 4:46am GMT

:)
phraephrae creative
Entry 26-Oct-08, 4:36am GMT

:)
phraephrae creative
Entry 26-Oct-08, 4:30am GMT

Would love to make changes based on your feedback! :)
ponkavfx creative
Entry 26-Oct-08, 3:33am GMT

I am trying to use the same colors as your website. Also, simple and clean. I will be posting more ideas as well. thank you
monsterleo creative
Project Comment 26-Oct-08, 1:56am GMT

Thank you for recognizing a concept copy. As creatives, we really appreciate that.

Cibi
johndoe creative
Entry 26-Oct-08, 1:35am GMT

I realized this version is the one I meant to upload before.

second revision with background

thanks,
-sam
johndoe creative
Entry Comment 26-Oct-08, 1:32am GMT

Withdrawn: Whoops, I uploaded the wrong file.
sullivsn5 creative
Entry 26-Oct-08, 1:18am GMT

..minus the lipstick.
johndoe creative
Entry 25-Oct-08, 11:35pm GMT

Just another design concept.

I couldn't find sans serif, so again, I used a different font.


thanks,
-sam
johndoe creative
Entry 25-Oct-08, 10:43pm GMT

I took the liberty of adjusting the text and pretty much everything else.

hope you like.
-sam

NOD creative
Entry 25-Oct-08, 10:06pm GMT

my entry.
hm90017 creative
Entry 25-Oct-08, 9:38pm GMT

Late night writing.
thegirlinthecafe buyer
Entry Score 25-Oct-08, 9:22pm GMT

It is quite the same idea as Klamon submitted. And I am not sure a coffee stain conveys "professional" very well. Thanks.
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thegirlinthecafe buyer
Entry Score 25-Oct-08, 9:20pm GMT

I love the idea and it looks good but - an overturned coffee cup somehow doesn't convey "professional" for me.
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thegirlinthecafe buyer
Entry Score 25-Oct-08, 9:18pm GMT

Hi I think the idea is very similar to Monster Leo's idea. And also I don't quite get what the illustrations are? It looks like cushions? And the other one I have no idea? Doesn't seem to have anything to do with the logo.
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johndoe creative
Entry 25-Oct-08, 8:45pm GMT

I substituted the "a" in cafe with an overturned coffee cup and added different strokes and colors to the the rest of the text.

I tried to keep it simple and minimal and I hope it's to your liking.


If you want revisions made, I will happily submit.


thanks,
-sam
t_bailey25 creative
Entry 25-Oct-08, 7:05pm GMT

It's A Simple, Than Colorful One, You Need Any Alters Done To It, Inform Me. I Also Have a Few Other Ideas.