Clean-up our logo and logotype
a logo project by systemania

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$150
Ended 17-Oct-08
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evolution creative
Entry 4-Oct-08, 11:18pm GMT

Sorry for the delay, we had a friendly dad's rugby game on a beautiful Saturday afternoon ;)

I made your requested changes. I made our connecting arms just a bit thicker. Any thicker and I think they lose their elegance. I went ahead and did the MS orange/yellow, but not sure it ...(more)
rogue_pixel creative
Entry 4-Oct-08, 10:11pm GMT

same for the blue/green
rogue_pixel creative
Entry 4-Oct-08, 10:05pm GMT

a bit brighter on the colors and added a drop shadow.
rogue_pixel creative
Entry Comment 4-Oct-08, 9:54pm GMT

Withdrawn: sample
rogue_pixel creative
Entry Comment 4-Oct-08, 9:50pm GMT

Withdrawn: sample
rogue_pixel creative
Entry 4-Oct-08, 9:06pm GMT

here is the last set of revisions in the other MS colors.

thanks again
rogue_pixel creative
Entry 4-Oct-08, 8:46pm GMT

Hi,
I believe I covered the requested revisions, If I missed anything, or need to adjust colors some more, just let me know. working on the red/orange (yellow) version now.

thanks
systemania buyer
Entry Score 4-Oct-08, 8:01pm GMT

i added comments for the one you withdrew.
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systemania buyer
Entry Score 4-Oct-08, 7:54pm GMT

-I like the font that you are using for the word systemania
-please make the TM a little smaller. (maybe 2/3 of its current size)
-I like the IT SOLUTIONS size and look
-please keep this design up and make another one with the following changes to compare
-see if you can use the darker ...(more)
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rogue_pixel creative
Entry 4-Oct-08, 7:54pm GMT

here it is with uniform connection width. I had to adjust the smaller connections.
rogue_pixel creative
Entry Comment 4-Oct-08, 7:53pm GMT

Withdrawn: width on smaller connection needs to be adjusted

systemania buyer
Entry Score 4-Oct-08, 7:29pm GMT

Nice update – please keep this one active and upload any additions you have as a second image so we can compare.
- the TM should be superscript and not subscript. This requirement is from the trademark office.
- I think the size of the word systemania will look more proportional if it ...(more)
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rogue_pixel creative
Entry 4-Oct-08, 7:18pm GMT

Here it is with the proposed colors. Just say so if you need anything else.

Thanks again for the great communication, it makes my job so much easier.
rogue_pixel creative
Entry 4-Oct-08, 7:01pm GMT

Here it is with the symmetry you asked for, starting on color revisions. Let me know if there are any other tweaks you need.

thanks again for your time.
evolution creative
Entry Comment 4-Oct-08, 6:49pm GMT

Withdrawn: The buyer didn't really like this one.
evolution creative
Entry Comment 4-Oct-08, 6:37pm GMT

Withdrawn: Whoops, I uploaded the wrong file.
evolution creative
Entry 4-Oct-08, 6:36pm GMT

Sorry I made a quick adjustment after seeing your new attachments about proportions on the connecting bands.
evolution creative
Entry 4-Oct-08, 6:25pm GMT

Thank you for the productive critique. I think I made all of the adjustments you asked for. Please let me know.

Thank You
Jamie
rogue_pixel creative
Entry Comment 4-Oct-08, 6:00pm GMT

Withdrawn: misunderstood
rogue_pixel creative
Entry 4-Oct-08, 5:56pm GMT

Here it is straightened to vertical with exact guides applied to illustrate symmetry. the bottom half is flipped both horizontally and vertically, notice that the symmetry stays identical. The appearance of non symmetry when it is at 45 degrees is a trick of the eye because of the angled natural curves. ...(more)
systemania buyer
Project Comment 4-Oct-08, 5:39pm GMT

added a microsoft logo in project (possible colors.png), to experiment with the colors.
thanks
systemania buyer
Project Comment 4-Oct-08, 5:10pm GMT

I see the lines, the sphears look aligned but the shapes do not. If you fold the long and short shapes that connect the sphears on these lines they do not seem identical.
systemania buyer
Entry Score 4-Oct-08, 5:00pm GMT

Thanks. Not bad.
-looks symetric
-The long M shape's waste should be smaller to match the smaller shape as i added in the project
-I would prefer if the logo colors match the word colors.
-I like the M in systemania to be lower case
-IT SOLUTIONS should be IT Solutions or IT solutions
-missing ...(more)
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rogue_pixel creative
Entry 4-Oct-08, 4:50pm GMT

Hi,
thanks again for the feedback, here it is with lines to show the fixed symmetry. Waiting for your color suggestion.
rogue_pixel creative
Entry Comment 4-Oct-08, 4:43pm GMT

Withdrawn: Whoops, I uploaded the wrong file.