Yeah, this is better. Moving it up gives it some space and stops the navigation looking crowded. And the green color definitely seems better.
I've thought about that tree and flower on the left since my last feedback and they should definitely be removed. On the final image they can be further to the left of the logo in the spare 1000px.
Carry on with the other changes - you're doing a great job!
Disclosure: I created everything in my entry and I didn't copy anyone else's concept. (?)
Thanks for the quick feedback. I made the foreground hills lighter, the background hills I lightened a touch, but though it gave more depth to keep them a hair darker. I moved the text up about 8px. as well. I have a bit of room to add more houses etc, but don't want it to get cluttered without enough green space. Let me know on the volume of objects.
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8-Oct-08, 1:57pm GMT
I've thought about that tree and flower on the left since my last feedback and they should definitely be removed. On the final image they can be further to the left of the logo in the spare 1000px.
Carry on with the other changes - you're doing a great job!
8-Oct-08, 9:44am GMT
Disclosure: I created everything in my entry and I didn't copy anyone else's concept. (?)
Thanks for the quick feedback. I made the foreground hills lighter, the background hills I lightened a touch, but though it gave more depth to keep them a hair darker. I moved the text up about 8px. as well. I have a bit of room to add more houses etc, but don't want it to get cluttered without enough green space. Let me know on the volume of objects.Thank You
Jamie
8-Oct-08, 2:36am GMT