My biggest problem with the entry is that you've not paid enough attention to the brief that was given.
- Best Mortgage Deals text must be on the left
- I don't want clouds (I'll add these myself later)
- Hills don't have drop shadows
- The tree in the foreground is a nice idea which I used on the holding page, but I'm not sure I can re-use that idea so easily on the header.
- The city blocks in the background look like they are about to topple over - they need to be more upright! :)
Thank you - looking forward to seeing your next entry!
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My biggest problem with the entry is that you've not paid enough attention to the brief that was given.
- Best Mortgage Deals text must be on the left
- I don't want clouds (I'll add these myself later)
- Hills don't have drop shadows
- The tree in the foreground is a nice idea which I used on the holding page, but I'm not sure I can re-use that idea so easily on the header.
- The city blocks in the background look like they are about to topple over - they need to be more upright! :)
Thank you - looking forward to seeing your next entry!
8-Oct-08, 12:07pm GMT
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Best Mortgage8-Oct-08, 2:15am GMT