Thanks Charles, I make those changes and post back first thing in the morning. Sorry for the delay. It seems the message system here is a bit on the slow side at times.
1) The fancy tree next to the church thing looks a little confusing, mostly because of the small size. Perhaps try swapping it out for a normal tree. I like that fancy tree, but I think it would work a lot better if it was bigger/nearer the viewer. When it's small it just becomes a bit non-descript and difficult to make out what it is.
2) I think the blue color of the sky could be a little lighter, and I think the darkest green parts of the hills could be lighter - the darkest parts and still just a bit too dark.
It's hard to see the sun rays on the small preview - so if you could post an entry with just that area cropped in at 100% resolution, then I'll let you know if that bit is what I want.
Other than that I'd be more than happy to let you go ahead and do the other 2 x 1kpx of side sections!
Really appreciate your great work on this. It's looking exactly like it did in my head, which is awesome :)
It's fun making tiny super small dioramas. A nice break from the ordinary! let me know if this needs anything else and I will start adding the other 1kpx to the right and 1kpx to the left with the rest of the hill country.
Disclosure: I created everything in my entry and I didn't copy anyone else's concept. (?)
Added them back, but took the opacity from about 35% to 10%. I think it tones it down enough to put it back in the background and not draw the eye too much from the logo.
Comments
Jamie
9-Oct-08, 3:06am GMT
Here's my comments on the latest one:
1) The fancy tree next to the church thing looks a little confusing, mostly because of the small size. Perhaps try swapping it out for a normal tree. I like that fancy tree, but I think it would work a lot better if it was bigger/nearer the viewer. When it's small it just becomes a bit non-descript and difficult to make out what it is.
2) I think the blue color of the sky could be a little lighter, and I think the darkest green parts of the hills could be lighter - the darkest parts and still just a bit too dark.
It's hard to see the sun rays on the small preview - so if you could post an entry with just that area cropped in at 100% resolution, then I'll let you know if that bit is what I want.
Other than that I'd be more than happy to let you go ahead and do the other 2 x 1kpx of side sections!
Really appreciate your great work on this. It's looking exactly like it did in my head, which is awesome :)
- Charles
8-Oct-08, 11:16pm GMT
It's fun making tiny super small dioramas. A nice break from the ordinary! let me know if this needs anything else and I will start adding the other 1kpx to the right and 1kpx to the left with the rest of the hill country.
Thank You
Jame
8-Oct-08, 5:44pm GMT
Disclosure: I created everything in my entry and I didn't copy anyone else's concept. (?)
Added them back, but took the opacity from about 35% to 10%. I think it tones it down enough to put it back in the background and not draw the eye too much from the logo.Thank You
Jamie
8-Oct-08, 5:41pm GMT