Simple Composition - Landscape With Houses - I provide most pieces - you put them together
an illustration project by renesisx

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Ended 10-Oct-08
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evolution creative
Entry 8-Oct-08, 1:57pm GMT

Here you go. I moved flowers & co away from the text, added a roadway and a couple of tiny houses. Keep me posted on your thoughts or if you have any other inspiration. I don't want to go whole hog and add to much at the risk of getting it ...(more)
renesisx buyer
Entry Score 8-Oct-08, 12:07pm GMT

Thank you for your entry.

My biggest problem with the entry is that you've not paid enough attention to the brief that was given.

- Best Mortgage Deals text must be on the left
- I don't want clouds (I'll add these myself later)
- Hills don't have drop shadows
- The ...(more)
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renesisx buyer
Entry Score 8-Oct-08, 9:46am GMT

Thank you - that helps a lot actually! As you say - saves me having to grab the low-res preview and stick into the prototype myself.

Cheers!
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renesisx buyer
Entry Score 8-Oct-08, 9:44am GMT

Yeah, this is better. Moving it up gives it some space and stops the navigation looking crowded. And the green color definitely seems better.

I've thought about that tree and flower on the left since my last feedback and they should definitely be removed. On the final image they can be further ...(more)
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evolution creative
Entry 8-Oct-08, 2:42am GMT

Sorry, this one is with the site mock-up so you don't have to try and piece them together.
evolution creative
Entry Comment 8-Oct-08, 2:41am GMT

Thanks for the fast feedback. I have posted an updated version with those changes.

And after reading your comment again I uploaded one with your site mock to save you the trouble. Sorry about that :)
evolution creative
Entry 8-Oct-08, 2:36am GMT

Thanks for the quick feedback. I made the foreground hills lighter, the background hills I lightened a touch, but though it gave more depth to keep them a hair darker. I moved the text up about 8px. as well. I have a bit of room to add more houses etc, but ...(more)
ninarosemata creative
Entry 8-Oct-08, 2:15am GMT

Best Mortgage
renesisx buyer
Entry Comment 7-Oct-08, 10:50pm GMT

Hey again,

I just quickly tried the preview image in my prototype site design so I could get a better idea of how it would look.

Two small comments:

1) The logo text needs to go up a little bit - when I integrated the image, the drops on the letter "g" run ...(more)
renesisx buyer
Entry Score 7-Oct-08, 10:43pm GMT

Wow, Jamie.

That's an amazing first entry - and I only posted this a couple of hours ago. Great work!

Your first question - more busy or not?

I would say slightly more busy, but really just try and use some more of the elements such as the other trees, flowers etc to just ...(more)
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renesisx buyer
Project Update 7-Oct-08, 10:25pm GMT

If you use Corel Draw, but you're confident in its ability to export in AI (Adobe Illustrator) format, then I'm happy for you to use that instead.
evolution creative
Entry 7-Oct-08, 10:20pm GMT

Let me know if you want this busier or simpler. Not sure how far we can push it on towards the busy side because of the space limitation but I am sure we can push it a bit :). I changed the green tones to match what is in the rest ...(more)
renesisx buyer
Project Update 7-Oct-08, 8:35pm GMT

I've added the missing "green-hills.jpg" file! Thank you to user "evolution" for pointing that out so quickly.

If you have any questions at all, please do not hesitate to ask...